Onassa Sun
Telescope - Honorable Mention (Grades 11 -12)
Distance: 3125 feet
Even from my distance
I could see she was
beautfl.
Pure black hair against skin
like the inside of
an eggshell.
Golden dragons snaked up her red qípáo,
winding tightly around her doe’s neck
like a silk
noose.
Her dress was red
like xuè.
Like blood.
This much I could tell from the telescope
at the top of the observatory.
—
Distance: 625 feet
Even from my distance
I could hear her
naked laughter.
Unaffected,
unguarded,
unconditional.
Her words flowed out like
wine
from a crystal decanter
— dark and rich and smooth.
And yet, once they hit the ground, they
effervesced
like light champagne and
floated up into the
sky.
— Lost —
— forever —
2
I watched through my telescope as her bubbles
drifted
and settled amongst
the larger stars.
Here was a woman
who did not belong on
Earth.
This much I could tell from the telescope
at the top of the observatory.
—
Distance: 125 feet
Even from my distance
I could smell her
cloying smoke.
Her incense carried from
Delphi
— now without a seer.
Intoxicating fumes in rock caves: actually
ethylene as
fake
prophecies
fake
fates
fake
destinies
waft from fake prophet’s
lips.
Burned dreams only
ashes
now is the only perfume she can
afford.
She gets them by the bottle
at her doorstep addressed to
The Oracle of Delphi.
This much I could tell from the telescope
at the top of the observatory.
3
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Distance: 25 feet
Even from my distance
I could taste her
failing sweetness.
Dragonfruits are
exotic
(exotic)
— magenta hide and jade scales
cradle milky white flesh.
Sever the crown,
seize a scale,
segregate skin from soft tissue.
Bite into the
bland.
Sympathize with the
almos—
sweetness of the dragonfruit.
Edit: she is dragonfruit
This much I could tell from the telescope
at the top of the observatory.
—
Distance: 5 feet
Even from my distance
I could feel she was
cold.
To the touch,
to herself,
to others all the
tbnf/
As a child I hunted for
seashells
vacated by their denizens and
wondered where they went, leaving only beautiful
shells behind.
4
Perhaps they became tired of being
pounded
again and
again,
monotonous
day
after monotonous
day
by the tide which eventually
swept them
away.
Away to where
loving
was the same as being
loved
and
lovers
remembered how to
love
even after seven years’
time.
This much I could tell from the telescope
at the top of the observatory.
—
Distance: 0 feet
Even from my distance
I knew
she was no longer
mine.